The passage is generally well written, but it contains a few grammatical issues, awkward phrases, inconsistent wording, and one factual wording error. Here are the main corrections:
Key corrections
- “You might step into the shower every morning”
- Better: “You might shower every morning” or “You might step into the shower each morning.”
- “scientific evidence supporting one type of shower over the other”
- Better: “scientific evidence supporting showering in the morning over showering at night, or vice versa” (clearer).
- “showering in the morning sends this residue…”
- Original:
showering in the morning sends this residue that you might have picked up overnight down the drain.
- Better:
Showering in the morning washes away the sweat, skin cells, and oils that accumulate overnight.
